Tuesday, May 6, 2014

Rongomaiwahine News - 1st Edition


9 comments:

  1. that was awesome Room 1. keep up the good mahi

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  2. Congratulations Room 1on your 1st edition. I really enjoyed watching Lila and Ocea. You were both professional, engaged me into listening to what you had to say and had animation in front of the camera. Awesome! Khalos and Jack - your intro to your segment and was a little bit different and I liked it a lot. There was some brilliant filming techniques by people where the camera was nice and close and it was easy to listen to people. Next time, I think some groups need to consider carefully what they are presenting eg. Not the first idea you come up with. Tripods are important - people don't want to watch wonky footage. In our starting introduction, the background needs to be considered more - chairs in the library is not a good background to be looking at. I can't wait until the end of term 2 to see what you create! Miss O'B

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  3. 3 thing i liked about it was that lila had a butilful smile on here face and clear voice alot of info on it and sharon doing her funny dance i love comedy

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  4. 3 thing that could be improved that some people could speak a bit louder sound in the backround and also some people need to SMILE! =)

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  5. Critiquing Critiquing
    1) Sharon and Angela swimming 1)Anthony walked away to early
    2)Lila's expression 2) I couldnt see Lila and Ocea
    3)Everyone Smiling 3) The backround behind Lila and Ocea

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  6. 3 things i liked about it that jack k and khalose had loud speaking and they had good animating and i liked there tisherts

    3 things i didn't like i didn't like how it was dark in mine and oceas one and in jack d i could hear talking in the back round and Anthony left to early in his but i loved it was funny and cool

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  7. Critiquing Critiquing
    1)Good animating 1)Anthony walked to early
    2)Lila's expression 2)Talking to fast Jack
    3)Everyone's smile's 3)Dark in the start background

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  8. Awesome stuff guys! Also very awesome to see you are all leaving some really helpful feedback. Can't wait to see what this terms edition looks like!

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  9. Awesome stuff guys! Also very awesome to see you are all leaving some really helpful feedback. Can't wait to see what this terms edition looks like!

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